tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738810673407846341.post8832082950025849277..comments2023-07-10T01:15:46.809-07:00Comments on Simply CK: Life RevisitedChristyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11190148251096131674noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738810673407846341.post-21689171662260773872011-04-17T19:39:39.096-07:002011-04-17T19:39:39.096-07:00You have such wonderful imagery packed into this p...You have such wonderful imagery packed into this piece. <br /><br />"Never one to accept questions she could not answer the idea death threw her analytical mind in topspin only calmed by therapy and pills." It's not really clear here what you are saying because I think there are a couple of words missing.<br /><br />"Marilyn just stared; disbelief etched as thick as her wrinkles." LOVE This line. I think it is the most vivid description in your piece and there are a LOT of vivid descriptions to choose from. You put words together so easily. The story flows well from start to finish.<br /><br />I'm so glad you linked up with this story!{Stephanie}The Drama Mamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01643310288610990260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738810673407846341.post-5539408670452114362011-04-17T00:37:10.706-07:002011-04-17T00:37:10.706-07:00Wow, that one'll make you think :)Wow, that one'll make you think :)Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13114405375722195161noreply@blogger.com