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Monday, December 20, 2010

Decorations Disaster

Back in the day (on my other blog), I used to write a little story with Jenny every Saturday.  I would wake up before the babies on Saturday morning and make-up a fun little 100 word story about a prompt found at Jenny's Saturday Centus.

And then we moved.  And then Saturdays got busy.  And then I stopped playing along. 

I miss it ... so, I'm back (new blog -- was Just Thinkin') but still same 'ole me.

The story can't be more than 100 words (not including the prompt), and the prompt is bolded.  Enjoy

Decorations Disaster

He watched as she backed his car out of the driveway, off to pick up her best friend.  It was time for their annual Christmas dinner with family and friends.  Recently having a teenage daughter had been tough on their relationship, but he had a surprise for her.

A little bit here; a little bit there the decorations were complete.

Bass pounding the car arrived full of teenage excitement.  He eagerly listened for the opening door and was rewarded with a shriek.

His face happy from the assumed excitement, he burst around the corner just in time to her his shocked daughter proclaim, "What was he thinking?  OMG!  Elves are sooo 2009…"

11 comments:

  1. Very cute story. Can't wait to see more of these.

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  2. Typical teenage reaction. Years from now, she will be telling that story with a tear in her eye! Great take on the prompt.

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  3. awe ... teens are not the easiest beasts to live with ...

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  4. I agree with Jo..teens sure can be a challenge. I enjoyed your take on the prompt

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  5. You can never please a teenager! :)

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  6. Well done...fine writing, and a cute story...Peace

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  7. I'm happy your back. I enjoyed your centus very much. I hope you continue doing it.

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  8. Ah, teenagers. We could shoot them, but them we would miss them too much! This is a great and well written take.

    Namaste..........cj

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  10. This prompt lends itself well to differences of opinion when it comes to decorating! I took that path myself!

    Well done!

    Best wishes,
    Anna
    Anna's SC#33

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  11. We're seeing a lot of teenagers this week..LOL. This is a good one!

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